Secret

Secret

by

NING YANQI

DM1I

FINAL ASSIGNMENT

My Blog: f13dm0547vaf1031.blogspot.com

My Email: f13dm0547@student.nafa.edu.sg

Deadline: 2 APRIL 2014

EXECUTIVE SUMMARY:

TITLE: Secret

                       

GENRE: Suspense／Terror                 

TARGET AUDIENCE: teenagers 20 somethings / young adults           

THE DOMINANT CULTURAL / SOCIAL ISSUE FEATURED IN MY WORK IS:

I hope people can keep a secret.

LOGLINE:

Peter is not a human. Anna knew Peter's secret. Peter design lets the girlfriend killed Anna.

SYNOPSIS:

Anna is a cellist. She knew Pete's secret. Pete is not a human being. He is a eating soul monster.

After Anna knew Pete knew his secret. He design girlfriend killed Anna. So he can eat two souls.

RESEARCH (if needed)

REFLECTION PAPER

Reflection1: why i think my story will appeal to the target audience 

I think this story is very easy for them to accept. And this theme is very attracted to the crowd.

Reflection2: what i think makes a good screen story

I think the story has a clear purpose. Theme attractive. Wonderful story.

3 ACT STRUCTURE:

ACT1 SETUP	ACT2 CONFRONTATION	ACT3 RESOLUTION
Key Character(s): Peter Must-have Info: Not human	Confrontation: Anna knows the secret. Peter a quarrel with his girlfriend.	Climax (Grand Finale): The death of Anna. The police investigation. Peter safety. Resolution:
MOTIVE: Anna knew Pete's secret. Pete wanted to kill Anna.	TURNING POINT: Peter design girlfriend kill Anna.	MOTIVE RESOLVED? Yes
Conflict/Obstacles: How to kill Anna. Meanwhile get his girlfriend Anna soul.	Conflict/Obstacles: How can you get girlfriend and Anna's soul. Up the Stakes:	Moral of the Story if any:

LOGLINE:

Peter is not a human. Anna knew Peter's secret. Peter design lets the girlfriend killed Anna.

STORYLINE :

  Anna is a cellist. She and Peter is a band of actors. Anna she found Peter 's secret. Peter  not a human. He is a eating man soul monster.

  One evening. Anna because practicing home late. Her little earlier to go home, go shortcut. Her found Pete's secret. She saw Peter's quarrel with his girlfriend.

“How do you today?" Girlfriend asked Peter.

“Nothing is too late and you should go home." Pete has some impatience.

“Before you is not the case." Girlfriend asked him.

“I'm not feeling well today. No matter what. It's late. You should go back." Peter has been getting upset.

“What about you? You didn't love me? Are you ready to break up with me?" The girlfriend's uneasy.

“No. I said I'm not comfortable. We'll see you tomorrow!"

“I see you are tired of me. I think we broke up. A month we saw a. It is not that you are sick of me!" His girlfriend to Peter shouted.

“Oh! I don't want to fight with you. I was really uncomfortable." Peter said he to go.

“OK. Let's break up. You hate the guy." His girlfriend to Peter cried.

  Having girlfriend angrily away. But at this time, but Pete red eyes in the direction away from his girlfriend leaked this ghastly smile.

"The game starts you that delicious soul will be mine."

Anna terrified. She began to keep a deep breath to relax. But still was Pete discovered.

  A week later. Anna's body was lying in the apartment parking lot next to her red car. She  20:00 o'clock in the murder, she is scheduled to arrive at his concert theater  A former 15 minutes. A total of the two assailants firing. The first was a bullet through her right thigh, in her purple   The short skirts left a large blood. The second fatal bullet in her heart  , In her white blood left on the shirt. Miss Anna car, placed the cello.

  Police heard the testimony of three people.   The landlord found the bodies of his wife, said Anna decided to participate in the concert。A week since Anna did not practice large  Violin, or have not taken out of the car from the cello.   Anna and I have to say that she and Peter unpleasant things happened.

  Peter insisted that he and Anna make up already, Anna said she wanted to perform;  And in 20:10 to pick up her, and then as usual together with car  To the theater. But he did not wait for her. 

  Jack said. He added that Anna will no doubt be able to practice do not have to have a good performance, as a result of .The concert is repeated for the program. 

 

  Anna's death is Pete's girlfriend kill her. Peter's girlfriend think Pete fell in love with Anna. But all this is Pete acting. Because Anna knew Pete's secret. So Peter can eat two soul. Because Peter thought that only the dead will not tell the secret.