2014年4月9日星期三

NEW

  Anna is a cellist. She and Peter is a band of actors. Anna she found Peter 's secret. Peter  not a human. He is a eating man soul monster.

  One evening. Anna because practicing home late. Her little earlier to go home, go shortcut. Her found Pete's secret. She saw Peter's quarrel with his girlfriend.
“How do you today?" Girlfriend asked Peter.
“Nothing is too late and you should go home." Pete has some impatience.
“Before you is not the case." Girlfriend asked him.
“I'm not feeling well today. No matter what. It's late. You should go back." Peter has been getting upset.
“What about you? You didn't love me? Are you ready to break up with me?" The girlfriend's uneasy.
“No. I said I'm not comfortable. We'll see you tomorrow!"
“I see you are tired of me. I think we broke up. A month we saw a. It is not that you are sick of me!" His girlfriend to Peter shouted.
“Oh! I don't want to fight with you. I was really uncomfortable." Peter said he to go.
“OK. Let's break up. You hate the guy." His girlfriend to Peter cried.
  Having girlfriend angrily away. But at this time, but Pete red eyes in the direction away from his girlfriend leaked this ghastly smile.
"The game starts you that delicious soul will be mine."
Anna terrified. She began to keep a deep breath to relax. But still was Pete discovered.

  A week later. Anna's body was lying in the apartment parking lot next to her red car. She  20:00 o'clock in the murder, she is scheduled to arrive at his concert theater  A former 15 minutes. A total of the two assailants firing. The first was a bullet through her right thigh, in her purple   The short skirts left a large blood. The second fatal bullet in her heart  , In her white blood left on the shirt. Miss Anna car, placed the cello.
  Police heard the testimony of three people.   The landlord  wife found the bodies of his, said Anna decided to participate in the concertA week since Anna did not practice large  Violin, or have not taken out of the car from the cello.   Anna and I have to say that she and Peter unpleasant things happened.

  Peter insisted that he and Anna make up already, Anna said she wanted to perform;  And in 20:10 to pick up her, and then as usual together with car  To the theater. But he did not wait for her. 
  Jack said. He added that Anna will no doubt be able to practice do not have to have a good performance, as a result of .The concert is repeated for the program. 

 

  Anna's death is Pete's girlfriend kill her. Peter's girlfriend think Pete fell in love with Anna. But all this is Pete acting. Because Anna knew Pete's secret. So Peter can eat two soul. Because Peter thought that only the dead will not tell the secret.

 Modification


Anna is a cellist. She and Peter is a band of actors. Anna she found Peter 's secret. Peter  not a human. He is a eating man soul monster.

  One evening. Anna because practicing home late. Her little earlier to go home, go shortcut. Her found Pete's secret. She saw Peter's quarrel with his girlfriend.
“How do you today?" Girlfriend asked Peter. 
“Nothing is too late and you should go home." Pete has some impatience.
“Before you is not the case." Girlfriend asked him.
“I'm not feeling well today. No matter what. It's late. You should go back." Peter has been getting upset.
“What about you? You didn't love me? Are you ready to break up with me?" The girlfriend's uneasy.
“No. I said I'm not comfortable. We'll see you tomorrow!"
“I see you are tired of me. I think we broke up. A month we saw a. It is not that you are sick of me!" His girlfriend to Peter shouted.
“Oh! I don't want to fight with you. I was really uncomfortable." Peter said he to go.
“OK. Let's break up. You hate the guy." His girlfriend to Peter cried.
  Having girlfriend angrily away. But at this time, but Pete red eyes in the direction away from his girlfriend leaked this ghastly smile. 
"The game starts you that delicious soul will be mine." 
Anna terrified. She began to keep a deep breath to relax. But still was Pete discovered.

  A week later. Anna's body was lying in the apartment parking lot next to her red car. She  20:00 o'clock in the murder, she is scheduled to arrive at his concert theater  A former 15 minutes. A total of the two assailants firing. The first was a bullet through her right thigh, in her purple   The short skirts left a large blood. The second fatal bullet in her heart  , In her white blood left on the shirt. Miss Anna car, placed the cello. 
 
 Police heard the testimony of three people.   The landlord wife found the bodies of his, said Anna decided to participate in the concert。A week since Anna did not practice large  Violin, or have not taken out of the car from the cello.   Anna and I have to say that she and Peter girl friend unpleasant things happened.

  Peter insisted. And in 20:10 to pick up her, and then as usual together with car  To the theater. But he did not wait for her.  

 
Peter's girl friend said. At that time I was on the way to a concert. Because I want to and Peter reconciled.


  
  Anna's death is Pete's girlfriend kill her. Peter's girlfriend think Pete fell in love with Anna. But all this is Pete acting. Because Anna knew Pete's secret. So Peter can eat two soul. Because Peter thought that only the dead will not tell the secret.







Secret






Secret
by
NING YANQI
DM1I




FINAL ASSIGNMENT
My Blog: f13dm0547vaf1031.blogspot.com
My Email: f13dm0547@student.nafa.edu.sg
Deadline: 2 APRIL 2014







EXECUTIVE SUMMARY:

TITLE: Secret
                       
GENRE: SuspenseTerror                 
TARGET AUDIENCE: teenagers 20 somethings / young adults           

THE DOMINANT CULTURAL / SOCIAL ISSUE FEATURED IN MY WORK IS:
I hope people can keep a secret.
LOGLINE:
Peter is not a human. Anna knew Peter's secret. Peter design lets the girlfriend killed Anna.

SYNOPSIS:
Anna is a cellist. She knew Pete's secret. Pete is not a human being. He is a eating soul monster.

After Anna knew Pete knew his secret. He design girlfriend killed Anna. So he can eat two souls.



RESEARCH (if needed)







REFLECTION PAPER
Reflection1: why i think my story will appeal to the target audience 
I think this story is very easy for them to accept. And this theme is very attracted to the crowd.
Reflection2: what i think makes a good screen story
I think the story has a clear purpose. Theme attractive. Wonderful story.


3 ACT STRUCTURE:
ACT1 SETUP
ACT2 CONFRONTATION
ACT3 RESOLUTION

Key Character(s):
Peter


Must-have Info:
Not human




Confrontation:
Anna knows the secret.
Peter a quarrel with his girlfriend.


Climax (Grand Finale):
The death of Anna. The police investigation. Peter safety.


Resolution:
MOTIVE:
Anna knew Pete's secret. Pete wanted to kill Anna.





TURNING POINT:
Peter design girlfriend kill Anna.
MOTIVE RESOLVED?
Yes
Conflict/Obstacles:
How to kill Anna.
Meanwhile get his girlfriend Anna soul.
Conflict/Obstacles:
How can you get girlfriend and Anna's soul.



Up the Stakes:



Moral of the Story if any:






LOGLINE:
Peter is not a human. Anna knew Peter's secret. Peter design lets the girlfriend killed Anna.
STORYLINE :
  Anna is a cellist. She and Peter is a band of actors. Anna she found Peter 's secret. Peter  not a human. He is a eating man soul monster.

  One evening. Anna because practicing home late. Her little earlier to go home, go shortcut. Her found Pete's secret. She saw Peter's quarrel with his girlfriend.
“How do you today?" Girlfriend asked Peter.
“Nothing is too late and you should go home." Pete has some impatience.
“Before you is not the case." Girlfriend asked him.
“I'm not feeling well today. No matter what. It's late. You should go back." Peter has been getting upset.
“What about you? You didn't love me? Are you ready to break up with me?" The girlfriend's uneasy.
“No. I said I'm not comfortable. We'll see you tomorrow!"
“I see you are tired of me. I think we broke up. A month we saw a. It is not that you are sick of me!" His girlfriend to Peter shouted.
“Oh! I don't want to fight with you. I was really uncomfortable." Peter said he to go.
“OK. Let's break up. You hate the guy." His girlfriend to Peter cried.
  Having girlfriend angrily away. But at this time, but Pete red eyes in the direction away from his girlfriend leaked this ghastly smile.
"The game starts you that delicious soul will be mine."
Anna terrified. She began to keep a deep breath to relax. But still was Pete discovered.

  A week later. Anna's body was lying in the apartment parking lot next to her red car. She  20:00 o'clock in the murder, she is scheduled to arrive at his concert theater  A former 15 minutes. A total of the two assailants firing. The first was a bullet through her right thigh, in her purple   The short skirts left a large blood. The second fatal bullet in her heart  , In her white blood left on the shirt. Miss Anna car, placed the cello.
  Police heard the testimony of three people.   The landlord found the bodies of his wife, said Anna decided to participate in the concertA week since Anna did not practice large  Violin, or have not taken out of the car from the cello.   Anna and I have to say that she and Peter unpleasant things happened.

  Peter insisted that he and Anna make up already, Anna said she wanted to perform;  And in 20:10 to pick up her, and then as usual together with car  To the theater. But he did not wait for her. 
  Jack said. He added that Anna will no doubt be able to practice do not have to have a good performance, as a result of .The concert is repeated for the program. 

 

  Anna's death is Pete's girlfriend kill her. Peter's girlfriend think Pete fell in love with Anna. But all this is Pete acting. Because Anna knew Pete's secret. So Peter can eat two soul. Because Peter thought that only the dead will not tell the secret.








2014年4月2日星期三

WEEK 13



1. What are common stereotyped / cliched
romance scenes?

   1 Candlelight Dinner

   2 Rose

   3 Cinema
   
   4 Kiss

2. What are the common issues portrayed in romance stories?

   1 Let people think those romantic scenes can be achieved in reality.

   2 In the love story is very like disaster to reflect the love.

   3 

3. List 5 Romance Movies/TV Shows that you like and 5 you dislike. Give 5 reasons why you liked/disliked those movies/shows.

Like:

1 Scene It Twilight

2 The sound of music

3 Dear John letter

4  I Give My First Love to You

Love letter


Dislike

1 Moulin Rouge

Snow white and the Huntsman

Marie Antoinette

4 Waterloo Bridge

Romeo and Juliet

Give 5 reasons why you liked those movies/shows.


1 I like the ease of a love story. 

2 Like pure love story. 

3 easy to understand the love story. 

4 beautiful story scenes. 
5 story perfectly, not a tragedy.


Give 5 reasons why you disliked those movies/shows.



1 dull scene 
2 story does not warm
3 outcome is tragic
4 people feel uncomfortable reading
5 excessive entanglement of interests

STORY: Write a Romance Story for the Screen.
- LOGLINE = key character + motive + situation
- STORYLINE in 450-500 words

  

Logline:The boy is mute. But the girl likes boy. Girls and boys together to. Pretending to be mute life. She said in the boy's funeral: "he's gone."



Genre: Romance Teen Movies 


He is a mute, although can understand others speech, cannot say own actually feeling, she is his neighbor, the girl who is bound by a common destiny with the grandmother.

  He really looks like an elder brother, leads her to go to school, accompanies her to play, listens to her chirp with a smile grasps the speech.
He only uses the hand signal and she converses, possible she to be able to read his each look. Gazes at in her vision from elder brother, she knew he has likes oneself.

  Afterwards, she finally tests went to college, extremely happy, he then starts to go all out to make money, then sends continuously for her. She has not rejected. She always believed that he loved her.

  Finally, she has graduated, started the work. Then she said firmly to him that, “Elder brother, I must marry to you!” He looked like only the frightened rabbit to escape, again is not willing to see her, how regardless of she does entreat.

  Do you think I pity you? Do you think I appreciate you? no, I’ve fallen in love you. But, she can not obtain his reply.

  One day, she has been admitted to the hospital suddenly. He has scared, runs looks at him. Doctor said, in her throat steadily a lump, although has excised, destroyed the vocal cord actually, Possibly again also could not deliver the speech. On hospital bed, her tearful eyes dance gaze he, therefore they married.

  Very many years, nobody listens to them to deliver a speech. They use the hand, with pen, converses with the look, Shares is joyful and is sad. They became have loved the object which the men and women envied. The people said, that pair of how happy mute husbands and wives!

  Love could not prevent god of death arrival, he abandoned her to walk first.
The people feared she cannot undergo loses lover's attack to comfort her. By now, she takes back gazes at his portrait after-image the dull crazy vision, opens the mouth to say suddenly that, “He walked.”



  The rumor has revealed. She did not become dumb. All this is a lie. She loved him. She for him, a lifetime is not talking. Just to be together.


2014年3月26日星期三

Week 11 Lie (GENRE & STORIES)

  

Logline: Boys are dumb. But the girls liked boys. For girls and boys together. Pretend lifetime the dumb.

Genre: Romance Teen Movies 


He is a mute, although can understand others speech, cannot say own actually feeling, she is his neighbor, the girl who is bound by a common destiny with the grandmother.

  He really looks like an elder brother, leads her to go to school, accompanies her to play, listens to her chirp with a smile grasps the speech.
He only uses the hand signal and she converses, possible she to be able to read his each look. Gazes at in her vision from elder brother, she knew he has likes oneself.

  Afterwards, she finally tests went to college, extremely happy, he then starts to go all out to make money, then sends continuously for her. She has not rejected. She always believed that he loved her.

  Finally, she has graduated, started the work. Then she said firmly to him that, “Elder brother, I must marry to you!” He looked like only the frightened rabbit to escape, again is not willing to see her, how regardless of she does entreat.

  Do you think I pity you? Do you think I appreciate you? no, I’ve fallen in love you. But, she can not obtain his reply.

  One day, she has been admitted to the hospital suddenly. He has scared, runs looks at him. Doctor said, in her throat steadily a lump, although has excised, destroyed the vocal cord actually, Possibly again also could not deliver the speech. On hospital bed, her tearful eyes dance gaze he, therefore they married.

  Very many years, nobody listens to them to deliver a speech. They use the hand, with pen, converses with the look, Shares is joyful and is sad. They became have loved the object which the men and women envied. The people said, that pair of how happy mute husbands and wives!

  Love could not prevent god of death arrival, he abandoned her to walk first.
The people feared she cannot undergo loses lover's attack to comfort her. By now, she takes back gazes at his portrait after-image the dull crazy vision, opens the mouth to say suddenly that, “He walked.”

  The rumor has revealed. She did not become dumb. All this is a lie. She loved him. She for him, a lifetime is not talking. Just to be together.